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2022-10-20 2095

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I think the best age to travel is teenagers. It will be a comfortable break for teenage students who have a hard time studying and go on a trip. And children can appreciate the experience. However, the way they express their feelings will be different from those of adults. Because the eyes of children and adults are very, very different.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I think the best age to travel is teenagers. 
>>> CORRECT!

It will be a comfortable break for teenage students who have a hard time studying and go on a trip. 
>>> It will be a comfortable break for teenage students who have a hard time studying and going on a trip. 

And children can appreciate the experience. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, the way they express their feelings will be different from those of adults. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because the eyes of children and adults are very, very different.
>>> CORRECT!
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