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How have your political views changed during your life?

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2022-10-20 1903

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Before having my children, I was not that much into politics. However, I was getting more and more interested in Korean politics because I want the world where my children will live to be better off or to develop through better politics, which can be possible with our interest in or encouragement for politics in Korea. Still, I don't have a particular perspective on politics. But I will learn and think about politics because it is politics that influences the next generation's world the most and I believe there is something political I can do for a better world for my children.

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Good evening, Steve!

I appreciate your genuine input about the question asked. Not only you submitted a coherent answer, but it is also easy to comprehend.

I agree with your statement that a country's political condition influences the future of the next generation; hence, we must be aware of the political status to provide necessary actions and support to our government. 


Thank you again for your homework submission. Until next time!


~ Teacher Gela


Before having my children, I was not that much into politics. 
>> CORRECT

However, I was getting more and more interested in Korean politics because I want the world where my children will live to be better off or to develop through better politics, which can be possible with our interest in or encouragement for politics in Korea. 
>> However, I was getting increasingly interested in Korean politics because I want a world where my children will live to be better off or to develop through better politics, which can be possible with our interest in or support for politics in Korea.

Still, I don't have a particular perspective on politics. 
>> CORRECT

But I will learn and think about politics because it is politics that influences the next generation's world the most and I believe there is something political I can do for a better world for my children.
>> But I will learn and think about politics because it influences the next generation's world the most, and I believe there is something political I can do for a better world for my children.
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