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How old are your grandparents? How often do you see your grandparents?

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My grandmother is 70 years old and my grandfather was 69 years old. I often see them twice a month. But my mom's mom is meet every day. Because my mom's mom is living with my family and my dad's mom is living at Seoul. So we meet them at different times.

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Hi, Daisy!
I hope you can spend more time with your grandparents. ^_^
~Teacher Erin

My grandmother is 70 years old and my grandfather was 69 years old.
>>My grandmother is 70 years old, and my grandfather is 69 years old.
I often see them twice a month.
>>CORRECT
 But my mom's mom is meet every day.
>>But I can see my mom's mom every day.
 Because my mom's mom is living with my family and my dad's mom is living at Seoul.
>>Because my mom's mom is living with us, and my dad's mom is living in Seoul.
 So we meet them at different times.
>>CORRECT
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