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When I have to invite him who has a misunderstanding with me, I will send an invitation card including my personal letter. Even though there are many ways to solve misunderstanding, I prefer to write a letter to show my feelings. There are three reasons why I like to write a letter to solve the conflicts in this way: clearness, correction and objectiveness. First of all, I can share my opinion clearly with the letter. For example, I talked with my sister who thought I wasn't interested in her, so I wrote a letter to show how much I love her. If I had told her directly, I might not have talked in a clear manner. In addition, I can keep correcting my opinions in a various way while writing a letter. It will reduce my slips of the tongue. Finally, it is the best way to show our feelings objectively while restraining myself. For instance, when I talk with my friend, I feel hard to say my feelings by controlling the feeling. However, if I use the letter, it is much easier.

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Hello there Sophia,
Thank you for expressing yourself through writing. 
I commend your way of handling a misunderstanding. Have you heard, writing is a way of expressing yourself without being interrupted, and I guess when it is a personal letter, you don't see the reaction of the person whom you have wrote the letter.
Keep being inspired and motivated. Enjoy the day!
Aki~
When I have to invite him who has a misunderstanding with me, I will send an invitation card including my personal letter.
>>> CORRECT!
Even though there are many ways to solve misunderstanding, I prefer to write a letter to show my feelings. 
>>> Even though there are many ways to solve misunderstandings, I prefer to write a letter to express my feelings. 
There are three reasons why I like to write a letter to solve the conflicts in this way: clearness, correction, and objectiveness. 
>>> There are three reasons why I like to write a letter to solve conflicts in this way: clearness, correction, and objectiveness. 
First of all, I can share my opinion clearly with the letter. For example, I talked with my sister who thought I wasn't interested in her, so I wrote a letter to show how much I love her.
>>> CORRECT!
 If I had told her directly, I might not have talked in a clear manner.
>>> CORRECT!
 In addition, I can keep correcting my opinions in a various way while writing a letter. 
>>> In addition, I can keep correcting my opinions in various ways while writing a letter. 
It will reduce my slips of the tongue. 
>>> CORRECT!
Finally, it is the best way to show our feelings objectively while restraining myself. 
>>> CORRECT!
For instance, when I talk with my friend, I feel hard to say my feelings by controlling the feeling. '
>>> CORRECT!
However, if I use the letter, it is much easier.
>>> CORRECT!
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