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2022-10-19 2864

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Hi, T.Donna.
How was your symptom?
Is it getting better?
I am so sorry that you can't see a doctor so easily just like here in Korea.
Anyway, I hope you will be cured soon.
Today in my clinic, there were some bad news; a new employee resigned, another new employee requested day-off because of some disease(but, we couldn't believe her. because she was late for her first day and had bad attitude for work), and some employees in administration dept. made a mistake for calculating income.
I could have punished them, but I didn't.
That's because I think all staffs including me are exhausted these days.
Thus, I should try to encourage them as possible as I can.
Today's homework is about giving up something.
I really hate giving up.
If I decide to do something, I always do that until success.
Of course, I have experiences to give up something because of time and money.
In that case, I felt too bad.
Giving up means failure, I think.
Never give up!
Take care.
See you in the morning.

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Good morning, Dr. Kim!

My symptoms are subsiding. Sorry for self-medicating. You know, I used to see a doctor when I get sick before. I realized they always give me the same medicine. ^^ Anyway, it is wrong to do what I do. But thanks to you, I am now feeling so much better.

In your clinic, people will come and go. This is already a reality that you have to contend with. Staying calm and focused will help you increase the value of your people. Soon enough, they will realise this and those who understand your vision and goals will absolutely stay. So stay strong and calm always.

Quitting is not in your vocabulary. You are determined to succeed. This is quite admirable. There are challenges but you overcome. Hence, success will come to you naturally.

I agree that we should never quit. We have to stay laser-focused on achieveing things. Like the Nike slogan says, "Just do it" we have to when we have nig dreams for ourselves and the people we love.

Your homework answer was easy to comprehend, used correct vocabulary and idioms, and maintains different discussions. Excellent writing!

See you again in class.

-T. Donna~

Hi, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your symptom?
>> Correct!

Is it getting better?
>> Correct!

I am so sorry that you can't see a doctor so easily just like here in Korea.
>> Correct!

Anyway, I hope you will be cured soon.
>> Correct!

Today in my clinic, there were some bad news; a new employee resigned, another new employee requested day-off because of some disease(but, we couldn't believe her. because she was late for her first day and had bad attitude for work), and some employees in administration dept. made a mistake for calculating income.
>> Today in my clinic, there were some bad news; a new employee resigned, another new employee requested for a day-off because of some disease(but, we couldn't believe her because she was late for her first day and had a bad attitude for work), and some employees in the administration dept. made a mistake in calculating the income.

I could have punished them, but I didn't.
>> Correct!

That's because I think all staffs including me are exhausted these days.
>> That's because I think all staff including me are exhausted these days.

Thus, I should try to encourage them as possible as I can.
>> Correct!

Today's homework is about giving up something.
>> Today's homework is about giving up on something.

I really hate giving up.
>> Correct!

If I decide to do something, I always do that until success.
>> If I decide to do something, I always do that until I'm successful.

Of course, I have experiences to give up something because of time and money.
>> Correct!
Or: Of course, I have experiences to give up somethings because of time and money.

In that case, I felt too bad.
>> Correct!

Giving up means failure, I think.
>> Correct!

Never give up!
>> Correct!

Take care.
>> Correct!

See you in the morning.
>> Correct!
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