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We should do in daily that reduce using plastic and turn off the light. Then, we have to recognize how is pollution going seriously. Because experience for pollution to us closely is once in a blue moon.

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Wonderful use of the idiom, Rosie! kkk. Reading the last sentence also made me smile because it goes to show how attentive you are in our class. ^_^ I appreciate it a lot~ Have a great day! ^^
~T.Harmony <3

We should do in daily that reduce using plastic and turn off the light.
>> We should reduce our plastic consumption and turn the lights off when necessary on a daily basis.
Then, we have to recognize how is pollution going seriously.
>> We then have to recognize the severity of pollution in the world.
Because experience for pollution to us closely is once in a blue moon.
>> Because experiencing pollution in a close manner happens once in a blue moon.
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