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1. connect: Through the internet, I can connect with acquaintances whenever I want to talk.
2. convenient: What is the most important in my life? It must be convenient life because it can improve the quality of life.
3. fast: Modern society goes too fast to remember what I did a short time ago, so I start to write a journal in case of tracing back my life.
4. WIFI: WIFI is a very efficient system to use the internet for free, so when I used up my paid data, I have to figure out where WIFI is available to connect to the Internet.
5. unthinkable: One of the unthinkable moments in my life is the time to get the news to accept me as an employee of the company.

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Good day, Jung! Your sentences were great! Fantastic use of sentence patterns and of course the vocabulary words. You made very creative sentences in this homework. You make me so proud always. Here are some corrections that I have for you, these corrections will show you how to make your sentences more concise and packed-full. Review them carefully and take notes if you can. Have a great day ahead!

- Teacher Raven 

1. Through the internet, I can connect with acquaintances whenever I want to talk.

>> Correct.
2. What is the most important in my life? It must be convenient life because it can improve the quality of life.
>> What is the most important thing in my life? It must be having a convenient life because it can improve the quality of how I live.
3. Modern society goes too fast to remember what I did a short time ago, so I start to write a journal in case of tracing back my life.
>> Modern society goes too fast to remember what I did a short time ago, so I started writing a journal in case I need to trace my life back.
4. WIFI is a very efficient system to use the internet for free, so when I used up my paid data, I have to figure out where WIFI is available to connect to the Internet.
>> Correct. OR "...so when I used up all my paid data..."
5. One of the unthinkable moments in my life is the time to get the news to accept me as an employee of the company.
>> One of the unthinkable moments in my life is when I received the news that I got hired in the company I applied for.
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