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1. What welfare do you want to get?
2. Are you a confident person in front of people?
3. Wow, I got mesmerized from you.
4. In the past month, An weather was so hot.
5. Who does make you comfortable?

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Wow Elic! Good job with this homework. Though I still see some 'question type' sentences, you still managed to create some 'statement type' sentences as well. Good job with the use of certain articles that are sometimes being forgotten like 'a' and 'the'. Please review these corrections that I have for you. Overall, you did fairly well, so congratulations!

- Teacher Raven 

1. What welfare do you want to get?
>> What kind of welfare do you want to get?
2. Are you a confident person in front of people?
>> Correct.
3. Wow, I got mesmerized from you.
>> Wow, I got mesmerized by your beauty.
4. In the past month, An weather was so hot.
>> During the past month, the weather felt so hot.
5. Who does make you comfortable?
>> Who makes you comfortable?
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