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Do you think that organic food is much better than normal food or are they about the same?

I think that organic food is better than normal food in health because there are no chemicals.
As I know, begetables which grow with chemicals still containe those chemicals even cleanning with water.
(Professionals say that the contain of chemicals are safe to human body)
But the problem is the cost.
Taste and nutrition are same with normal food but organic food is much expensive than normal food.
( I used to find that organic food is not delicious compared with normal food)
If you ask me which I prefer for a meal,
Frankly, I don't care but If both are the same price, I prefer organic food for my health.

Do you konw that organic begetables have lots of parasites and warms ?
It 's up to you whether you have chemicals or parasites.
hahahaha

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Hi Eunice!
Thanks for answering your homework! ^^
See you tomorrow~ 
Jhozel :)

Do you think that organic food is much better than normal food or are they about the same?

I think that organic food is better than normal food in health because there are no chemicals.
>> OR: In my opinion, organic food is healthier than conventional food because it has no chemicals.
As I know, begetables which grow with chemicals still containe those chemicals even cleanning with water.
>>As I know, vegetables which are grown with chemicals still contain those chemicals even after cleaning with water.
(Professionals say that the contain of chemicals are safe to human body)
>>Professionals say that the chemicals contained are safe for the human body.
But the problem is the cost.
>>OR: The problem is the price. 
Taste and nutrition are same with normal food but organic food is much expensive than normal food.
>>Correct.
( I used to find that organic food is not delicious compared with normal food)
>>I find organic food is not as delicious as normal food.
If you ask me which I prefer for a meal,
>>Correct.
Frankly, I don't care but If both are the same price, I prefer organic food for my health.
>> OR: To be honest, I don't care. If the cost is the same for both, I choose organic food for my health.
Do you konw that organic begetables have lots of parasites and warms ?
>>Do you know that organic vegetables have lots of parasites and worms?
It 's up to you whether you have chemicals or parasites. hahahaha
>>Correct. 
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