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Do you find it easy to explain your feelings to another person? If not, why is it difficult?

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I can easily explain my feeling to another person.
It is not difficult for me from child.
Sometimes, I have to hide my feelings.
But, usually I talking about my feeling and mood well.
I tend to be honest with my feeling so when I'm happy, I say 'I'm happy' and smile.
And when I sad I cry well.
When I express feeling honest, I can find the exactly reason about my feeling then I can brace my energies.
And people can realize my mood and they can help me.
But to much expression can be my weakness.
Some bad people might be blindside me.
But I think expressing is better the hiding.
And also I want ti know people's feeling and I want to sympathize.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Thank you for letting me know who you are.  You actually said the real thing.  You should continue being true to yourself and also help those who need you.  Don't let other people take advantage of your weaknesses.  Stay strong, Chae! ^^


~T. Maine

I can easily explain my feeling to another person.
>> I can easily explain my feelings to another person. 
It is not difficult for me from child.
>> It is not difficult for me since childhood.
Sometimes, I have to hide my feelings.
>> Correct. 
But, usually I talking about my feeling and mood well.
>> But I usually talk about my feelings and mood well. 
I tend to be honest with my feeling so when I'm happy, I say 'I'm happy' and smile.
>> I tend to be honest with my feelings so when I am happy, I say, "I'm happy" and smile. 
And when I sad I cry well.
>> And when I am sad, I cry a lot. 
When I express feeling honest, I can find the exactly reason about my feeling then I can brace my energies.
>> When I express my honest feelings, I can find the exact reason for my feelings, and then I can restore my energy. 
And people can realize my mood and they can help me.
>> People then can realize my mood and can help me.
But to much expression can be my weakness.
>> But too much expression of these can be my weakness. 
Some bad people might be blindside me.
>> Some bad people might blindside me.
>>OR: Some people might misunderstand me. 
But I think expressing is better the hiding.
>> Correct. 
And also I want ti know people's feeling and I want to sympathize.
>> I also want to know people's feelings and I want to sympathize them. 

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