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I think he meant "life is more meaningful when you're busy and not going the way you think". Because when we are busy with other plans, we have a lot to do and it can be difficult because things don't go as we thought. Life is similar. There are days when it is hard to fight with someone and there are days when I live a busy life, and there are days when I do what I want to do. I'd like to think he meant this.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I think he meant "life is more meaningful when you're busy and not going the way you think". 
>>> CORRECT!

Because when we are busy with other plans, we have a lot to do and it can be difficult because things don't go as we thought. 
>>> CORRECT!

Life is similar. 
>>> CORRECT!

There are days when it is hard to fight with someone and there are days when I live a busy life, and there are days when I do what I want to do. 
>>> CORRECT!

I'd like to think he meant this.
>>> CORRECT!
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