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1. abortion : The abortion is to kill unborn babies from moms¡¯ wombs without their permission, so it is like killing which can also say murder.
2. pills : Take these pills three times a day with pure water.
3. protection : Safe jackets, helmets, and other safety tools are needed to be checked all the time for protection from unknown harms.
4. impact : Drug addiction have a bad impact on society forever.
5. legal : Selling alcohol to teenagers is not legal in Korea.

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Hey there, Jung! Congratulations on doing a job well-done! I am very pleased with how you used the vocabulary words in your own sentences. You were very creative and you thought outside of the box with this one. There are some few corrections here, please do review them carefully. Some words were a bit misplaced, and there were some words which I added to give them a "complete thought". Take note of them. Thank you very much for your continued effort with your homework! :)

- Teacher Raven 

1. abortion : The abortion is to kill unborn babies from moms¡¯ wombs without their permission, so it is like killing which can also say murder.
>> Abortion is killing unborn babies from their mothers¡¯ wombs, so may also mean murder.
2. pills : Take these pills three times a day with pure water.
>> Correct.
3. protection : Safe jackets, helmets, and other safety tools are needed to be checked all the time for protection from unknown harms.
>> Jackets, helmets, and other safety tools are needed to be checked regularly to ensure our protection from unknown harm.
4. impact : Drug addiction have a bad impact on society forever.
>> Drug addiction has a permanent negative impact on our society.
5. legal : Selling alcohol to teenagers is not legal in Korea.
>> Correct.
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