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Can you control your emotions well? How?

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Yes I can control my feelings well.If I'm angry First, who think about what had gone wrong again.When I'm sad, funny stories and fun is watching the sad thing, you forget.When would be unfair to the innocent don't think the situation.It's because a false idea of the more bitter.However, mood swings when regulation is too sad or too angry when isseup, too.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Yes I can control my feelings well.
>>> Yes, I can control my feelings well.

If I'm angry First, who think about what had gone wrong again.
>>> If I'm angry first, who thinks about what had gone wrong again?

When I'm sad, funny stories and fun is watching the sad thing, you forget.
>>> CORRECT!

When would be unfair to the innocent don't think the situation.
>>> When would be unfair to the innocent don't think about the situation.

It's because a false idea of the more bitter.
>>> It's because of a false idea of the more bitter.

However, mood swings when regulation is too sad or too angry when isseup, too.
>>> However, mood swings when regulation is too sad or too angry when issues, too.
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