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The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once

Yes, Everyting doesn't happen at a same time because time cannot stop.
As long as time exists, nothing can happen at once.

Oh! Johzel~~ Enstein? ^^
It is so profound.
Do you want to make me a philosopher or a scientist?
That saying is not familliar with me.
I am not sure What Enstein wanted to tell us.
Tell me what you think about the saying.

Here is my one of favorite saying by Ensetin.
" Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of value "

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Hi Eunice! Thanks for answering your homework! ^^
Well, my understanding about this saying is that: we must manage our time wisely since "time doesn't happen at once".
The definition of time wisely spent is the ability to schedule, plan, and prioritize our tasks. Putting first what is more important because we can not bring back the time. ^^
-Jhozel

The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once
>> Correct!
Yes, Everyting doesn't happen at a same time because time cannot stop.
>>Yes, nothing happens at the same time since time cannot be stopped.
As long as time exists, nothing can happen at once.
>> Correct! 
Oh! Johzel~~ Enstein? ^^
>>Oh! Jhozel~~ Einstein? ^^
It is so profound.
>> Correct. OR: That is really deep.
Do you want to make me a philosopher or a scientist?
>>Do you want to turn me into a philosopher or a scientist?
That saying is not familliar with me.
>>That saying is not familiar to me.
I am not sure What Enstein wanted to tell us.
>> I am not sure what Einstein wanted to tell us.
Tell me what you think about the saying.
>>Correct! 
Here is my one of favorite saying by Ensetin.
>>Grammatically correct! *Einstein 
" Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of value "
>> Correct!
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