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회원님의 영작문

Do you think it’s more difficult for older people to learn a new language? Explain.
I think learning a new language will be very difficult to older people. The students and young people have a lot of times to study english but not for old people and maybe old people don't have a foreign friend or who speak another language, so they don't have any friends to speak. And also some older people forgot something a lot then younger people.

Why is there a strong demand for language skills?
Because the language skills are being very important nowadays. For example, there are many IT company today, so they are looking for the people who can speak foreign language. English is obligation and it will be better if we can speak various language. So when we contact with foreign company, we will communicate without language problemes and we can also say what services we offer to foreign clients.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thanks, Se Won!

 

Language helps express our emotions, eagerness, and queries to the world around us. People who converse in the same language can understand each other; people pursuing different languages cannot understand each other.

 

-Kristine ^^

 

Do you think it’s more difficult for older people to learn a new language? Explain.

>> Correct.
I think learning a new language will be very difficult to older people.

>> I believe learning a new language will be very difficult for older people.

The students and young people have a lot of times to study english but not for old people and maybe old people don't have a foreign friend or who speak another language, so they don't have any friends to speak.

>> Students and young people have plenty of time to study English. On the other hand, old people may not have foreign friends with whom to practice their language skills.

And also some older people forgot something a lot then younger people.

>> Also, some elderly individuals forget things more easily than younger ones.

Why is there a strong demand for language skills?

>> Correct.
Because the language skills are being very important nowadays.

>> Language skills is very important in today’s society.

For example, there are many IT company today, so they are looking for the people who can speak foreign language.

>> For example, there are many IT companies today that are currently looking for individuals with foreign language abilities.

English is obligation and it will be better if we can speak various language.

>> English is needed, however it would be better if we could speak more than one language.

So when we contact with foreign company, we will communicate without language problemes and we can also say what services we offer to foreign clients.

>> So, we could communicate with foreign companies without any language barriers and could also explain the services we provide to customers from other countries.

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