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Actually, the cost of living in most countries is expensive nowadays, but the price in South Korea is the highest among three countries I lived before. Especially, food expenses are crazy due to the Russia and Ukraine war.

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Hello, good evening, Judy!

I was expecting that your answer may be Canada but then as you have spoken of your experience below, it is actually in your country that the cost of living is the most costly. Then, salary as well as all of the commodities must come with a price.

Here on your homework answer, on the second sentence, the word 'especially' is most commonly found within the sentence and less at the start. So, great job to your short composition!

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

Actually, the cost of living in most countries is expensive nowadays, but the price in South Korea is the highest among three countries I lived before. 
>> Correct!

Especially, food expenses are crazy due to the Russia and Ukraine war.
>> Correct!
Or: Food expenses are crazy especially due to the Russia and Ukraine war.
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