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All students actually study. Here's why. First, it is because you have to study in order to know what you are doing. Second, if you actually study, you can understand the contents of the study better. Third, you have to study in order to get high grades. Fourth, the way you find yourself without officially learning doesn't know exactly whether it's wrong or right every time. For example, sometimes it's right to use that method, and sometimes it's wrong.So I think it's right to learn officially from a teacher, not to find a way by yourself.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


All students actually study. Here's why. 
>>> CORRECT!

First, it is because you have to study in order to know what you are doing. 
>>> CORRECT!

Second, if you actually study, you can understand the contents of the study better. 
>>> CORRECT!

Third, you have to study in order to get high grades. 
>>> CORRECT!

Fourth, the way you find yourself without officially learning doesn't know exactly whether it's wrong or right every time. 
>>> CORRECT!

For example, sometimes it's right to use that method, and sometimes it's wrong.
>>> CORRECT!

So I think it's right to learn officially from a teacher, not to find a way by yourself.
>>> CORRECT!
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