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Do you think that it is a good idea to stereotype people?

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In my opinion, it is not a good idea to stereotype people.
If the world doesn't change, then it can be a good idea.
But the world always changes and we need to change too.
But if we are in the fixed ideas, then it will be hard to adapt to the changing world.
Because of this reason, I think stereotyping people is not a good idea.

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Hello John!
Wow! A job well done! Thanks for you efforts today! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

In my opinion, it is not a good idea to stereotype people.
>>CORRECT!
If the world doesn't change, then it can be a good idea.
>>CORRECT!
But the world always changes and we need to change too.
>>CORRECT!
But if we are in the fixed ideas, then it will be hard to adapt to the changing world.
>>But if we have fixed ideas, then it will be hard to adapt to the changing world.
Because of this reason, I think stereotyping people is not a good idea.
>>CORRECT!
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