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Do you easily get affected by the bad mood of others? Answer in a few sentences.

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I think I easily get affected by others¡¯ bad mood. If someone doesn¡¯t look good, I will be conscious of them. So, I become careful when I¡¯m do something and try not to provoke them.

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Hello there, Judy!

I think that it would be good for you to think of others' mood, however, if you did not cause it, it is alright to just act neutral and naturally. But then, you are thoughtful and considerate in not upsetting or annoying them.

Look at the third sentence and analyze the grammar suggestion. You answer was straightforward and contains good choices of words. Carry on!

See you tomorrow then.

-T. Donna~

I think I easily get affected by others¡¯ bad mood. 
>> Correct!

If someone doesn¡¯t look good, I will be conscious of them. 
>> Correct!

So, I become careful when I¡¯m do something and try not to provoke them.
>> So, I become careful when I¡¯m doing something and try not to provoke them.
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