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What is your favorite mood? Answer in a few sentences.

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My favorite mood is a delight because I wish to give a happiness of being with me to surrounding people. If they are happy, then I can get energy from it.

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Hi there, Judy!

Truly, delight is an exciting feeling of inspiration and motivation. Moreover, it contains energy and power. Then, being with these people empowers you as well. If you are one, then people around you are lucky to have you.

Kindly go over my grammar suggestions. They have to do with the use of the article 'a'. Read them carefully. Well done!

See you tomorrow!

-T. Donna

My favorite mood is a delight because I wish to give a happiness of being with me to surrounding people. 
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