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When can homework be counterproductive?

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In my opinion, too much homework can be counterproductive.
Every people has own capacity of working, studying and memorizing.
But if we ignore it and keep doing too much works and study, then it can even hurt our moods or minds.
Because of this reason, I think we shouldn't do too much homework.

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Hello John! 
Thanks for sharing your opinion about making homework. See you tomorrow in class and keep up the good work. ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

In my opinion, too much homework can be counterproductive.
>>CORRECT!
Every people has own capacity of working, studying and memorizing.
>>Every person has their own capacity of working, studying and memorizing.
But if we ignore it and keep doing too much works and study, then it can even hurt our moods or minds.
>>But if we ignore it and keep doing too much work and studying, then it can even hurt our emotional and mental health. 
Because of this reason, I think we shouldn't do too much homework.
>>CORRECT!
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