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What adjectives would you use to describe your personality?

작성자: 김*경
2022-10-06 3213

회원님의 영작문

The questions above would be embarrassing to me because it was the first time I was asked about my personality. I feel that I am kind of greedy. I have many skills to acquire for this age which is approaching 50 years. And I want to be an easy-going person so that others can feel free to shoot the breeze with me at any time. Lastly, I want to be a person who others will miss after death because I think it is after death that people judge whether someone has been doing well or not throughout his or her whole life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Steve!
(^__^)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

Each of us has an own personality. Each of us is unique from the others. Each of us embodies a special fusion of many personality features. There is no one else who possesses the same combination of the main five personality traits (and their subtypes) as you do.

Have a good weekend!

__T. Mayleen :)


The questions above would be embarrassing to me because it was the first time I was asked about my personality.
>>> The questions above would be embarrassing for me because it's the first time I've been asked about my personality.
I feel that I am kind of greedy.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I feel a little bit greedy right now.
I have many skills to acquire for this age which is approaching 50 years. And I want to be an easy-going person so that others can feel free to shoot the breeze with me at any time.
>>> I have many skills to acquire for this age, which is approaching 50 years old. To encourage others to chat with me whenever they like, I also want to become an easy-going person.
Lastly, I want to be a person who others will miss after death because I think it is after death that people judge whether someone has been doing well or not throughout his or her whole life.
>>> Lastly, I want to be a person that people will miss when I'm gone because I believe that's when people really decide whether or not someone lived a good life.
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