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How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

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I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student. My wife and I have been keen on my children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education. The result of our hard-working will have made fruits in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with. Probably I will see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.

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Good evening, Steve!
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Although we can't predict the future, we can still have dreams.
Don't hold yourself back and always know that you are capable of anything you set your mind to.

"So many of our dreams at first seem impossible, then they seem improbable, and then, when we summon the will, they soon become inevitable." (-Christopher Reeve)

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I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student.
>>> I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years, and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student.
>>> OR: I am 44 years old in Korean age. In 10 years' time, I'll be 54 years old and my eldest daughter, who'd be a university student by then, will be 23.
My wife and I have been keen on my children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education.
>>> My wife and I have been keen on our children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education.
>>> OR: My wife and I have been very interested in our kids' education and have put a lot of effort, time, and money into it.
The result of our hard-working will have made fruits in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with.
>>> The result of our hard work will bear fruit in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with it.
Probably I will see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.
>>> I think I will probably see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.
>>> OR: In ten years, I believe I'll look back and be proud of my fruitful efforts.
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