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How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

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I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student. My wife and I have been keen on my children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education. The result of our hard-working will have made fruits in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with. Probably I will see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.

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Good evening, Steve!
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Although we can't predict the future, we can still have dreams.
Don't hold yourself back and always know that you are capable of anything you set your mind to.

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I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student.
>>> I am 44 years old in Korean age. I am going to be 54 years old in ten years, and my first daughter will be 23 years old as a university student.
>>> OR: I am 44 years old in Korean age. In 10 years' time, I'll be 54 years old and my eldest daughter, who'd be a university student by then, will be 23.
My wife and I have been keen on my children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education.
>>> My wife and I have been keen on our children¡¯s schooling, having spent a lot of energy, time, and money on their education.
>>> OR: My wife and I have been very interested in our kids' education and have put a lot of effort, time, and money into it.
The result of our hard-working will have made fruits in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with.
>>> The result of our hard work will bear fruit in ten years. I hope it will be good enough for us and my children to be satisfied with it.
Probably I will see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.
>>> I think I will probably see myself proud in ten years with rewarding fruits.
>>> OR: In ten years, I believe I'll look back and be proud of my fruitful efforts.
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