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Hi there, T. Donna.
I almost died because there were too many clients today.
We got a new record about the number of patients.
Thus, I feel so happy, although I am exhausted.
Actually, I am not done with my paperwork.
So, after my homework, I have to finish it.
Maybe I will get a sleep late.
This morning class, I tried to speak more and more, as you told me.
I think you dribbled me talking more.
You are a good teacher.
Meanwhile, today's homework is a bad experience of some travel.
Something came to my mind suddenly.
When I was in the University hospital, my senior doctor, colleague doctor and I went to America for seminar and trip.
We joined the seminar in Chicago first, and after that, we traveled many places; San Francisco, LA and Las Vegas.
In San Francisco, we lost our GPS, because Someone broke the car's window and stole it.
And in Las Vegas, we couldn't join the parties that were held in many places, because we were not confident.
Briefly, it was a bad memory.
See you soon.

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Good day once again, Dr. Kim!

Being busy is best when income flows like water. Your clinic is doing extremely well, congratulations for your hard work and consistent service to your patients. I wish you this kind of business always.

During travel, there could be a lot of unexpected situations. By then, we need to stay calm, think well, and stay graceful about a situation because encountering trouble in another country could mean too much hassle and can limit enjoyment. 

On your homework answer, there was a very high occurence of correct sentences. Not only that the sentences were correct, their grammar structure was also very finely put together to create beautiful meanings. Keep that up. 

You have done a massive, impressive job in speaking in class today.

Enjoy work!

-T. Donna~

Hi there, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

I almost died because there were too many clients today.
>> Correct!

We got a new record about the number of patients.
>> Correct!

Thus, I feel so happy, although I am exhausted.
>> Correct!

Actually, I am not done with my paperwork.
>> Correct!

So, after my homework, I have to finish it.
>> Correct!

Maybe I will get a sleep late.
>> Maybe I will get sleep late.

This morning class, I tried to speak more and more, as you told me.
>> Correct!

I think you dribbled me talking more.
>> Correct!

You are a good teacher.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, today's homework is a bad experience of some travel.
>> Correct!

Something came to my mind suddenly.
>> Correct!

When I was in the University hospital, my senior doctor, colleague doctor and I went to America for seminar and trip.
>> When I was in the the university hospital, my senior doctor, a colleague doctor, and I went to America for a seminar and a trip.

We joined the seminar in Chicago first, and after that, we traveled many places; San Francisco, LA and Las Vegas.
>> Correct!

In San Francisco, we lost our GPS, because Someone broke the car's window and stole it.
>> Correct!
Or: someone

And in Las Vegas, we couldn't join the parties that were held in many places, because we were not confident.
>> Correct!

Briefly, it was a bad memory.
>> Correct!

See you soon.
>> Correct!
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