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What can you say about foreign students staying in South Korea without a valid visa?

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There is a program which exchanges students to give a chance learning various cultures between countries. It was not easy to study in abroad due to expenses and fears living in other country. However, we can easily see foreigners in any places because of the globalization. All people are asked to show their passport when they travel to other countries and need to get valid visa to guarantee their indentification. Those are basic documents to visit or work to other countries. It is pleasure to have foreign students in my country because they give a chance learn foreign language and cultures. We were really afaid to meet and talk with foreigners due to language barrier but young people don't have any serious problem to communicate with them because of the students exchange program at schools and in the universities. However, I object to get people from overseas without visa because I don't want to put me in danger.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

There is a program which exchanges students to give a chance learning various cultures between countries. 
>> CORRECT! 
It was not easy to study in abroad due to expenses and fears living in other country. 
>> CORRECT! 
However, we can easily see foreigners in any places because of the globalization. 
>> CORRECT! 
All people are asked to show their passport when they travel to other countries and need to get valid visa to guarantee their indentification. 
>> All people are asked to show their passport when they travel to other countries and need to get a valid visa to guarantee their identity. 
Those are basic documents to visit or work to other countries. 
>> CORRECT! 
It is pleasure to have foreign students in my country because they give a chance learn foreign language and cultures. 
>> It is a pleasure to have foreign students in my country because they give a chance learn foreign language and cultures. 
We were really afaid to meet and talk with foreigners due to language barrier but young people don't have any serious problem to communicate with them because of the students exchange program at schools and in the universities. 
>> We were really afraid to meet and talk with foreigners due to the language barrier, but young people don't have any serious problems to communicate with them because of the students exchange program at schools and in the universities. 
However, I object to get people from overseas without visa because I don't want to put me in danger.
>> However, I object to get people from overseas without visa because I don't want to put myself in danger.
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