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How do you start your day?

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I start my day by waking up late. I wake up and snooze and keep saying, "five minutes more, PLEASE??" And i say that like 12 more times until mom screams,"HEATHER, you've slept about 1 hour late!" And I wake up bolt upright and then collapse down again on the dining room chair. I snooze again when mom bathes in the tub and I startle up again by mom shoving the door open. "huh.., yeahh... snnnore.. riiight.. What the he*k! Oh sorry I have to bath and all and wash my face and blah blah..," I do a run on. And an unfortunate mom watches me in I'm-furious-at-you-but-also-sad-for-you-heather face, leaning on the white windowsill. I stay quiet with a giant red GUILLTY on my forehead. Then a now teary mom charges towards a big-eyed me and wrestles me in a sad hug that suspiciously chokes me. Then I start the class. That pretty much how me and mom start our moring in a very unique-strange way. And can you believe all that happens when my DAD snores happily like a bear?! # OMG..., topsy turvey❣

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Good day, Heather! It's really great to wake up every morning because it's a blessing. Every morning is a new day and a new beginning. Let's be thankful all the time.~T. Lyn
I start my day by waking up late. 
>>Correct.
I wake up and snooze and keep saying, "five minutes more, PLEASE??" 
>>I wake up because of my alarm clock but go back to sleep again and I keep saying "five minutes more, please."
And i say that like 12 more times until mom screams,"HEATHER, you've slept about 1 hour late!" 
>>Then my mom said, "Heather, you slept an hour late."
And I wake up bolt upright and then collapse down again on the dining room chair. 
>>Then I strengthen up, hurried to the dining area, and suddenly collapse on the chair.
I snooze again when mom bathes in the tub and I startle up again by mom shoving the door open. 
>>When my mom takes a bath in the bathtub, I started to sleep again and was startled when she pushes her door open.
"huh.., yeahh... snnnore.. riiight.. 
>>I snored.
What the he*k! 
>>I realized, I needed to wake up.
Oh sorry I have to bath and all and wash my face and blah blah..," I do a run on. 
>>And I have to take a bath and brush my teeth, so I run faster.
And an unfortunate mom watches me in I'm-furious-at-you-but-also-sad-for-you-heather face, leaning on the white windowsill.
>>Unfortunately, my mom is looking at me while leaning against the while windowsill with an angry and so sad "Heather" face.
I stay quiet with a giant red GUILLTY on my forehead. 
>>I stay quiet with red on my forehead and seem like guilty.
Then a now teary mom charges towards a big-eyed me and wrestles me in a sad hug that suspiciously chokes me. 
>>Then, my mom with teary eyes, rushes toward me and wrestles me with a big, sad hug that suspiciously chokes me.
Then I start the class. 
>>Correct.
That pretty much how me and mom start our moring in a very unique-strange way. 
>>This is how my mom and I start the morning in a very unique and strange way.
And can you believe all that happens when my DAD snores happily like a bear?! 
>>And can you believe that all these things happen while my dad is snoring happily like a bear?
# OMG..., topsy turvey
>>Hashtag, "OMG! topsy-turvy"
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