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Good morning, once again.
As you know, today is a holiday, and it's my day-off.
Unfortunately, It's rainy outside.
Thus, I can't do any activities outside with my daughters.
Instead, I will spend time to play some board games and read books with them.
Of course, I should do my paperwork also.
Meanwhile, I wonder if my English skills are improving.
Because of my busy days, I only joined the class and did homework these days.
I couldn't study more though.
I wish I get used to English as fast as I can.
Now, this is my homework.
I like sightseeing, and actually my wife love sightseeing more.
Last spring, my family and my friend's family(who is a lawyer) went to Geoje island.
We experienced a fishing in the boat, it was awesome.
In the boat, I could feel the fresh air and the smooth wind.
In addition, we went to Oedo; a small island that is full of flowers and trees.
As you can expect, we enjoyed delicious foods.
Among them, mool-hoe(Cold soup with raw fish and sea foods) was excellent.

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Good afternoon!

Enjoy your board games and book time with your daughters today!

Meanwhile, trying to evaluate your English skills is a very good idea after some months of speaking in class and sometimes with your foreign clients. You can check your progress by the following:

1. When I ask you a question, "What do you understand with what you read?" you answer by explaining what you understood and not only merely stating the title of the topic.

For example: 
     It's about cars.

Ideal answer: 
       The paragraph is talking about the preferences or choices of people in buying cars. There are also some considerations or a check list in deciding to buy whether an old car or a new car.

2. Also, the questions from the book as well as all the other questions that the teacher asks you in class are designed for you to keep speaking in English. Sometimes, it can be pretty annoying but by trying to answer these questions, you can stretch your vocabulary and connect one idea to another.

Question: Do you agree with that?

Answer: 
      Yes.

Ideal Answer: 
      Yes, absolutely, I have experienced this when I drove my car on the road. It can be dangerous when when I am not familiar with the route.

3. Thus, when you are speaking 80-90% in our 25-minute class, that means you are doing well in English. In short, it is actually your decision to speak more or less during the class time.

Speaking should be just be as great as you write your composition. Since you can share so many information below, you can also say quite as much in class. Do not worry, you are doing very well in your speech. Maybe sometimes, you are so exhausted at the start of the day and gaining the momentum in speaking can be a challenge.

So, please go over my grammar suggestions on your homework. You have done a great job stating your thoughts about your day and your sightseeing experience.

Have a good afternoon, Dr. Kim.

-T. Donna~

Good morning, once again.
>> Correct!

As you know, today is a holiday, and it's my day-off.
>> Correct!

Unfortunately, It's rainy outside.
>> Unfortunately, it's raining outside.

Thus, I can't do any activities outside with my daughters.
>> Correct!
Or: Thus, I can't do any activity outside with my daughters.

Instead, I will spend time to play some board games and read books with them.
>> Correct!

Of course, I should do my paperwork also.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, I wonder if my English skills are improving.
>> Correct!

Because of my busy days, I only joined the class and did homework these days.
>> Correct!

I couldn't study more though.
>> Correct!

I wish I get used to English as fast as I can.
>> I wish I can get used to English as fast as I can.

Now, this is my homework.
>> Correct!

I like sightseeing, and actually my wife love sightseeing more.
>> Correct!

Last spring, my family and my friend's family(who is a lawyer) went to Geoje island.
>> Correct!

We experienced a fishing in the boat, it was awesome.
>> We experienced fishing in the boat and it was awesome.

In the boat, I could feel the fresh air and the smooth wind.
>> Correct!

In addition, we went to Oedo; a small island that is full of flowers and trees.
>> Correct!

As you can expect, we enjoyed delicious foods.
>> Correct!

Among them, mool-hoe(Cold soup with raw fish and sea foods) was excellent.
>> Correct!
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