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Describe a useful website. You should mention
What it is
How often you visit it
What kind of information it offers
Why you think it is useful

I know many websites and I use the website everyday. Especially, I use the Korean website that called Naver oftenly. Naver is one of the popular websites in Korea and almost Koreans use this website. Naver is Korean Google because we can do everything that we can do in Google. We can read news, watch videos, buy some stuffs, dictionnary, etc. So I think it offers every information, So I think this sites is very useful to Koreans because it's all-powerful website. But I don't recommend to use this website to foreigners because this site provides Korean language only.

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Thank you so much, Se Won! 

The Internet has basically made our lives easier and convenient. There are various websites for entertainment. We can watch movies and shows online. We can also book tickets and shop for products online. 

- Kristine ^^ 

I know many websites and I use the website everyday.

>> I am familiar with many other websites and I often use these websites.  

Especially, I use the Korean website that called Naver oftenly.

>> I often use a Korean website called Naver.

Naver is one of the popular websites in Korea and almost Koreans use this website.

>> Naver is one of the most popular websites in Korea. Most Koreans use this website.

Naver is Korean Google because we can do everything that we can do in Google.

>> Naver is like Korean Google because it has the same features.

We can read news, watch videos, buy some stuffs, dictionnary, etc.

>> We can read news, watch videos, buy some stuffs, use dictionary and etc.

So I think it offers every information,

>> So, I think it provides all the information.

So I think this sites is very useful to Koreans because it's all-powerful website.

>> I believe that this website is very useful to Koreans because it offers many features.

But I don't recommend to use this website to foreigners because this site provides Korean language only.

>> However, I don¡¯t recommend this website to foreigners because it only supports Korean language. 



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