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Do you agree that the CoVid-19 pandemic will soon end? Why or why not?

작성자: 황*하
2022-09-30 3002

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I sincerely hope that the pandemic ends but I don't think it will soon end because there are still too many confirmed cases in daily base. Many countries already allow people to put off face mask outside because its contagiousness looks lower than it used to be before. Most people in Korea consider it as a light disease like a cough. However, there are quite many people on a death due to the Covid-19 infection. Most of them are old and have a chronic disease so, it would be difficult to get over from the contagious diseases. We still have a qustion about a vaccine. Nobody gurantees the safety of it and its efficacy. Many people insist that vaccine is just the means of making money. It looks like make sense because all people in the world have got inoculated major vaccine such as Pizer, AZ., and so on. Vaccine is the first aid to solve the crisis from the virus, but I think the development of treatment aids will help to end the pandemic. If we can get the medication easily, nobody will

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I sincerely hope that the pandemic ends but I don't think it will soon end because there are still too many confirmed cases in daily base. 
>> I sincerely hope that the pandemic ends but I don't think it will soon end because there are still too many confirmed cases on a daily basis. 
Many countries already allow people to put off face mask outside because its contagiousness looks lower than it used to be before. 
>> CORRECT! 
Most people in Korea consider it as a light disease like a cough. 
>> CORRECT! 
However, there are quite many people on a death due to the Covid-19 infection. 
>> CORRECT! 
Most of them are old and have a chronic disease so, it would be difficult to get over from the contagious diseases. 
>> CORRECT! 
We still have a qustion about a vaccine. 
>> We still have a question about the vaccine. 
Nobody gurantees the safety of it and its efficacy. 
>> CORRECT! 
Many people insist that vaccine is just the means of making money. 
>> CORRECT! 
It looks like make sense because all people in the world have got inoculated major vaccine such as Pizer, AZ., and so on. 
>> It makes sense because all people in the world have got inoculated major vaccines such as Pizer, AZ., and so on. 
Vaccine is the first aid to solve the crisis from the virus, but I think the development of treatment aids will help to end the pandemic. 
>> CORRECT! 
If we can get the medication easily, nobody will
>> If we can get the medication easily, nobody will get sick or get infected by a certain disease.

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