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Why do people celebrate their birthdays?

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People celebrate their birthdays because their birthdays are the days they were born. Birthdays are special to them. Birthdays are the birth days. People love their parents more and their parents too, love them more than usual. Birthdays are festive in many ways so people give presents to birthday boy/girl. That is why people celebrate birtdays.

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Good day to you, Heather! Glad to know your idea about why people celebrate their birthdays. It is nice to celebrate your special days with your loved ones. Enjoy your day! ~T. Lyn
People celebrate their birthdays because their birthdays are the days they were born. 
>>People celebrate their birthdays because it's the day we were born.
Birthdays are special to them. 
>>Birthdays are special to us.
Birthdays are the birth days. 
>>It is mainly because birthdays are literally the days of our birth.
People love their parents more and their parents too, love them more than usual. 
>>People love their parents more, and they love them more than usual.
Birthdays are festive in many ways so people give presents to birthday boy/girl. 
>>It's because birthdays can be a celebration in various meanings, such as people giving a present to a boy or to a girl.
That is why people celebrate birtdays.
>>These are some of the reasons why people celebrate their birthdays.
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