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Good evening, T. Donna.
Most of works in the clinic finished.
A little paperwork remains though.
Work has no end, I think.
Nevertheless, I feel quite good, because there is no bad news in the clinic today.
I wish no more bad things will happen.
Today's homework is about accepting and rejecting.
Actually, I have a difficulty in rejecting for someone's ask.
In Korea, we usually say about it "Good men syndrome".
As you know, I like people, and I enjoy making many friends.
To obtain their mind, I always try to do for them.
I know this is a weird, but I can't stop doing this.
Perhaps, I don't have enough self-respect or pride.
As we discussed before, a few real friends are better than many acquaintances.
So, I think I should get used to reject.
On the other hand, it is so easy to accept new things, although I had no idea.
Of course, I will not lend a lot of money to someone though. LOL
I am positive, thus I like "Yes".
In conclusion, rejecting is more difficult for me.
See you tomorrow.

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Hi there, good day, Dr. Kim!

I totally agree that work is never done. If it were, we wouldn't have our jobs today. ^^ So, we have to be grateful as well as positive in doing the work we have, after all, we chose our jobs and careers. Anyway, I wish you another stress-free day.

Meanwhile, rejecting is considering how others may feel when we say 'no' to a request or a suggestion. If we do not know how to say 'no' sometimes people see this as our weakness and they tend to abuse the situation. If we know how to say 'no' in a gentle and reasonable manner, we will be able to gain other's respect, thus, we are drawing a clear line of what we can allow others to access from us.

I think that you are kind so, saying 'no' to others request is hard. I was the same when I was younger. But then, I learned that to keep quality and a high standard of people in our lives, we have to saty 'no' to so many things. In that way, only those who understand why we do this will stay and be our close family and friends.

Anyway, your homework answer was substantial, contains sentence combinations, have a few grammar suggestions, and has your distinct writing style. Keep up the great work always!

-T. Donna~

Good evening, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

Most of works in the clinic finished.
>> Most of the work in the clinic were finished.

A little paperwork remains though.
>> Correct!

Work has no end, I think.
>> Correct!

Nevertheless, I feel quite good, because there is no bad news in the clinic today.
>> Correct!

I wish no more bad things will happen.
>> Correct!

Today's homework is about accepting and rejecting.
>> Correct!

Actually, I have a difficulty in rejecting for someone's ask.
>> Actually, I have a difficulty in rejecting someone's request.

In Korea, we usually say about it "Good men syndrome".
>> In Korea, we usually call this the "good man syndrome".

As you know, I like people, and I enjoy making many friends.
>> Correct!

To obtain their mind, I always try to do for them.
>> Correct!
Or: To please them, I always agree with them.

I know this is a weird, but I can't stop doing this.
>> Correct!

Perhaps, I don't have enough self-respect or pride.
>> Correct!

As we discussed before, a few real friends are better than many acquaintances.
>> Correct!

So, I think I should get used to reject.
>> So, I think I should get used to rejecting offers.

On the other hand, it is so easy to accept new things, although I had no idea.
>> Correct!
Or: On the other hand, it is so easy to accept new things, although I have no idea.

Of course, I will not lend a lot of money to someone though. LOL
>> Correct!

I am positive, thus I like "Yes".
>> Correct!

In conclusion, rejecting is more difficult for me.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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