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Hi Mayleen

작성자: 김*완
2022-09-26 2053

회원님의 영작문

The worst one is that when i was young i had dream of becoming a football player and i asked my mother to send me to a football learning school but she rejected because she have heard the school have a bad punishment for teaching
That was so disappointed for me at that time

And the best acceptance is the acceptance to my first job. Before that i rejected some companies and i was nervous. But my first superior who was the interviewer hired me to my first company.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, One!
(^__^)
Thank you so much for this composition.
I have made some modifications or corrections that you can use for review later on.
I will see you later in class. Enjoy the rest of your afternoon.^^

Practice English whenever you can!

__T. Mayleen :)


The worst one is that when i was young i had dream of becoming a football player and i asked my mother to send me to a football learning school but she rejected because she have heard the school have a bad punishment for teaching
>>> The worst one is that when I was young, I had a dream of becoming a football player, and I asked my mother to send me to a football learning school, but she rejected it because she had heard the school's reputation for poor instruction.
That was so disappointed for me at that time
>>> That was so disappointing for me at that time.

And the best acceptance is the acceptance to my first job.
>>> My first job acceptance is the best acceptance.
Before that i rejected some companies and i was nervous.
>>> I had been rejected by some companies before that, and I was nervous.
But my first superior who was the interviewer hired me to my first company.
>>> However, the person who hired me for my first company was my first superior, who was the interviewer.
>>> OR: I was, however, employed by my first boss, who also served as my interviewer.
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