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I am not a sports fanatic, but I love playing and watching sports.
When I was a student, I enjoy playing various sports like kickball, softball and badminton.
When I had a free time on school, I collected freinds who played team sports with me.
After I graduated school, I couldn't do teamsports.
Nowadays, I have a good time climbing the mountain, doing yoga, swimming and playing golf.
I also like watching sports.
When I was an elementary school student, I often went to stadium to watch soccer game.
I cheered for the local soccer team, and it was interesting to watch sports game directly and eat fried chicken.
Recently I'm interested in baseball and soccer.
During the Worldcup and Olympic, my family or friends are seated in front of television and support Korean team.

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Good day once again, Dr. Stella!

Sports is one hobby which inculcates hardwork, strength, patience, discipline, and overall character. So watching games that we do not play gives us a glimpse on how to appreciate the sports.

My grammar suggestion here on your homework are more on the use of the determiners 'a' and 'the'. Be keen us using them in your sentences. Anyway, great job in expressing your thoughts and experiences regarding sports.

I will see you next time.

-T. Donna~

I am not a sports fanatic, but I love playing and watching sports.
>> Correct!

When I was a student, I enjoy playing various sports like kickball, softball and badminton.
>> Correct!
Or: When I was a student, I enjoy playing various sports like kickball, softball, and badminton.

When I had a free time on school, I collected freinds who played team sports with me.
>> When I had a free time in school, I joined freinds who played team sports with me.

After I graduated school, I couldn't do teamsports.
>> Correct!

Nowadays, I have a good time climbing the mountain, doing yoga, swimming and playing golf.
>> Correct!
Or: Nowadays, I have a good time climbing the mountain, doing yoga, swimming, and playing golf.

I also like watching sports.
>> Correct!

When I was an elementary school student, I often went to stadium to watch soccer game.
>> When I was an elementary school student, I often went to a stadium to watch a soccer game.

I cheered for the local soccer team, and it was interesting to watch sports game directly and eat fried chicken.
>> I cheered for the local soccer team, and it was interesting to watch a live sports game directly and eat fried chicken.

Recently I'm interested in baseball and soccer.
>> Correct!

During the Worldcup and Olympic, my family or friends are seated in front of television and support Korean team.
>> During the Worldcup and the Olympics, my family or friends are seated in front of the television and support the Korean team.

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