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The reason why I think we need honest is we can get trust from other people. Trust with other people is important to me. If I¡¯m honest I can get trust from other people. Then, we can believe each other. Also, if we lie to other people, we always hide trues. Actually, lie is easy to be caught, so I don¡¯t lie to everyone only except mom.

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Hi Bella!
It's always fun to think of this little scenarios.
Thank you for always sharing your ideas.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The reason why I think we need honest is we can get trust from other people. 
>> The reason why I think we need to be honest is so that we can earn the trust of other people.
Trust with other people is important to me. 
>> Trust among people is important to me. 
If I¡¯m honest I can get trust from other people. 
>> If I¡¯m honest, I could earn the trust of others. 
Then, we can believe each other. 
>> Correct
Also, if we lie to other people, we always hide trues. 
>> Also, if we lie to other people, we always hide the truth.
Actually, lie is easy to be caught, so I don¡¯t lie to everyone only except mom.
>> Actually, it's very easy to be caught in a lie so I don't do it except to my mom. 
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