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Do you love your grandparents? Why or why not?

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Most of the people love their grandparents. Why shouldn't we? Ms.Lynn loves her grandparents. I do, too. But sometimes, grandparents love us so much, they love us even more than how much OUR PARENTS love us.In MY opinion, grandparents get slightly annoying if they do that. There might be some people who think their grandparents are TOO annoying. Those people sometimes don't like their grandpar
ents. So that's why some people don't like their grandparents and some people like their grandparents. 💞

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Good day, Heather! Thank you for your honest opinion about the question I gave you. I surely miss my grandparents. Continue to love both your parents and grandparents. ~T. Lyn
Most of the people love their grandparents. 
>>Most people love their grandparents.
Why shouldn't we?
>>Correct.
Ms.Lynn loves her grandparents. 
>>Correct.
I do, too. 
>>Correct.
But sometimes, grandparents love us so much, they love us even more than how much OUR PARENTS love us.
>>But sometimes our grandparents love us so much that they love us much more than our parents love us.
In MY opinion, grandparents get slightly annoying if they do that.
>>In my opinion, grandparents get slightly annoying if they do such.
There might be some people who think their grandparents are TOO annoying.
>>Some may think their grandparents are too annoying.
Those people sometimes don't like their grandparents. 
>>Correct.
So that's why some people don't like their grandparents and some people like their grandparents.
>>So, I guess this is one of the reasons why some people like and dislike their grandparents.
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