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What is the TV program you like watching? Tell me about that program and what makes you like watchin

작성자: 박*태
2022-09-21 1590

회원님의 영작문

It is so hard for me to answer this question exactly , just because I don`t have any T.V. program at all. ^^
The reason why I don`t have any T.V. program is insufficient time to have the T.V. Program.
I would like to enhance my knowledge when spending a time by using my holiday and some rest of my time in working days.
And more improtant thing is talking the family first. I like to talk with my children and wife.
So, I put off the T.V. and gather them up the front table. and I continue to talk my family in the rest of time at the night or so.
But, I like just about baseball game to watch, In this time I connect the internet and use my yearly-usage ticket for M.L.B. baseball game
season ticket. This is only way to watch something in the spending time of being my fun time.
Anyway, See you soon in the phone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
Watching TV inspires the mind. It broadens knowledge of different cultures and promotes tolerance and global understanding of international issues. Through current affairs, discovery, lifestyle, cooking shows, and children's programs, television encourages scientific and cultural curiosity. And in communication, television facilitates one-way communication between the sender and the receiver. This allows the sender to persuade, entertain, inform and empower the audience. ~ Teacher QUENNY


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It is so hard for me to answer this question exactly , just because I don`t have any T.V. program at all. ^^
>> It is so hard for me to exactly answer this question because I just don`t watch any T.V. programs at all. ^^
The reason why I don`t have any T.V. program is insufficient time to have the T.V. Program.
>> The reason why I don`t watch any T.V. programs is insufficient free time to watch the T.V. Program.
I would like to enhance my knowledge when spending a time by using my holiday and some rest of my time in working days.
>> I would like to enhance my knowledge when spending my free time by using my holiday and some rest of my time on working days.
And more improtant thing is talking the family first. I like to talk with my children and wife.
>> And the more important thing is talking to my family first. I like to talk to my children and wife.
So, I put off the T.V. and gather them up the front table. and I continue to talk my family in the rest of time at the night or so.
>> So, I turn off the T.V. and gather them up at the table and continue to talk to my family for the rest of my time at the night or so.
But, I like just about baseball game to watch, In this time I connect the internet and use my yearly-usage ticket for M.L.B. baseball game.
>> But, I just like to watch baseball games. At this moment in time, I connect to the internet and use my yearly-usage ticket for the M.L.B. baseball game.
season ticket. This is only way to watch something in the spending time of being my fun time.
>>Season ticket. This is the only way to watch something on T.V when I'm spending my spare time enjoying and having fun. 
Anyway, See you soon in the phone.
>> Anyway, See you soon on the phone.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It is so hard for me to answer this question exactly , just because I don`t have any T.V. program at all. ^^
The reason why I don`t have any T.V. program is insufficient time to have the T.V. Program.
I would like to enhance my knowledge when spending a time by using my holiday and some rest of my time in working days.
And more improtant thing is talking the family first. I like to talk with my children and wife.
So, I put off the T.V. and gather them up the front table. and I continue to talk my family in the rest of time at the night or so.
But, I like just about baseball game to watch, In this time I connect the internet and use my yearly-usage ticket for M.L.B. baseball game
season ticket. This is only way to watch something in the spending time of being my fun time.
Anyway, See you soon in the phone.
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