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Why is it important to understand how dinosaurs lived?

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Because if we go to geographic or historic, we need to find their fossil and how to live. And we need to learn about them because they can choose my career. So I think learn about these subjects or we know to how dinosaurs lived are very important.

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Hi, Daisy!
Your opinion is great. I also agree with your answer. It is better to be aware than to be ignorant.
~T. Erin

Because if we go to geographic or historic,
>>The importance of knowing how dinosaurs lived is important because if we go to a geographic or historical place,
 we need to find their fossil and how to live.
>>CORRECT
 And we need to learn about them because they can choose my career.
>>CORRECT
 So I think learn about these subjects or we know to how dinosaurs lived are very important.
>>So I think learning about these subjects or knowing how dinosaurs lived is very important.
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