¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Is a concert better than a festival? Answer in a few sentences.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*¿¬
2022-09-20 1939

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think it depends on which musicians do you want to see and how much do they prepare for the concert. I had two concerts in my life, and they were perfectly satisfying. Therefore, I can say a concert is worth watching and enjoying.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Judy!

I totally agree with you. I have also been in concerts and they were included in the activities during festivals. Free concerts are the best since we do not have to pat for anything, just go and watch. Anyway, I hope that you can watch more concerts soon.

All of your sentences are correct, keep up the excellent work!

-T. Donna~

I think it depends on which musicians do you want to see and how much do they prepare for the concert. 
>> Correct!

I had two concerts in my life, and they were perfectly satisfying. 
>> Correct!

Therefore, I can say a concert is worth watching and enjoying.
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
119646 The friendship ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 1
119645 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 1
119644 Homework Á¤*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 89
119643 What kind of public transport do you use? / How important do you... ±è*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 135
119642 Q È«*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 2
119641 If you are going to buy a vehicle, what would it be and why? ¼­*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 2
119640 6.6 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 92
119639 What is the best historical place there in South Korea and why? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-06-07 225
119638 6/6 HOMEWORK ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 119
119637 What healthy food do you love eating? ±è*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 113
119636 The strangest festival I¡¯ve heard of. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 105
119635 Describe the best place you have been to ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 1
119634 Homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 113
119633 What is your favorite workout routine? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 2
119632 What career do you want 10 years from now? Answer in a few... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 116
119631 About next travel ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 0
119630 Two day\'s answer. ÇÑ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 180
119629 What is honesty? Are you always truthful? ¹é*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 131
119628 Proposal ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 4
119627 What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 91

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04