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Do you have a favorite sport? What is it? Tell me about its rules

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2022-09-20 1384

회원님의 영작문

Well, My favorite sport is baseball game in the U.S.A. also called "Major League Baseball" abbreviation to MLB
MLB Baseball have fun, eagerness, to the level of high motivated body moving sports.
Especially I like to watching the LA Dodgers game. because They knew the method of winning something, and always looking for
winning aganist others.
Baseball have a simple rules which related a wide range of their action but It`s really simple thing.
When a pitcher throw the ball, at that time a hitter move in the ball and took a chance to hit a ball over there.
Having a lot of score and then win that game as a result of game rules.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Justin, 
Keeping active through physical activity and sport has many benefits for the body. Sport can teach values such as fairness, teambuilding, equality, discipline, inclusion, perseverance, and respect. Also, it helps us to learn many new things in life. It assists us in building confidence, developing our personalities, and maintaining mental and physical balance. Sports and games help us to tackle and learn about how to overcome difficult situations in life and keep the body relax and minds free from tension. " Be Active" ~ Teacher QUENNY..)

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Well, My favorite sport is baseball game in the U.S.A. also called "Major League Baseball" abbreviation to MLB.
>>Well, my favorite sport is baseball game in the U.S.A. and it is called "Major League Baseball" abbreviation to MLB.
MLB Baseball have fun, eagerness, to the level of high motivated body moving sports.
Especially I like to watching the LA Dodgers game. because They knew the method of winning something, and always looking for winning aganist others.
>> MLB Baseball is a kind of fun sport and players have the eagerness to play to the level of highly motivated body-moving sports.
Baseball have a simple rules which related a wide range of their action but It`s really simple thing.
>>I like watching especially the LA Dodgers game because they know the method and have a good strategy on how to win in the game and always looking forward to winning against other teams. 
Baseball have a simple rules which related a wide range of their action but It`s really simple thing.
>> Baseball has simple rules which are related to a wide range of their action but it's a really simple thing.
When a pitcher throw the ball, at that time a hitter move in the ball and took a chance to hit a ball over there.
>> When a pitcher throws the ball, at that time the hitter moves in the ball and took a chance to hit the ball over there.
Having a lot of score and then win that game as a result of game rules.
>> Having a lot of scores then you win that game as a result of game rules.


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Well, My favorite sport is baseball game in the U.S.A. also called "Major League Baseball" abbreviation to MLB
MLB Baseball have fun, eagerness, to the level of high motivated body moving sports.
Especially I like to watching the LA Dodgers game. because They knew the method of winning something, and always looking for
winning aganist others.
Baseball have a simple rules which related a wide range of their action but It`s really simple thing.
When a pitcher throw the ball, at that time a hitter move in the ball and took a chance to hit a ball over there.
Having a lot of score and then win that game as a result of game rules.
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