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From.Heather : Hello! I have so many favorie teachers that Ican't just pick out one teacher. But all my favorite teachers are Mr.Thomas from kindergrten Mr.Jarret from my english academy (U.S. teachers), Ms.Jiah and Ms.Youngrong from elementary (Korean teachers) AND YOU, Ms.Lynn!! For my Mr.Thomas, he had always piggybacked me and pretended to be a rhino and made me laugh and helped me win the speech competition. For Mr.Jarret too, he hung me around like I am the daughter of him and gave me chocolates in seceret and he threatened ina kind way (?) he'd go too if I move to another english academy. Mr.Thomas and Mr.Jarret are really like my second dads. Ms.Jiah and Ms.Youngrong are my SCHOOL teachers so I can't kbow much about them but I can feel their warmth for me as if they are my second moms. And you, Ms.Lynn is my best best best best best best teacher in the world!! If I write more It will take 9 years to read! I'll tell you EVERYTHING I LOVE ABOUT YOU in class! : To. Ms.Lyn

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Hello Heather, thank you so much for doing your homework. Please constantly do your writing task in order to improve your writing skills. I'm really thankful that you chose me as one of your favorite teachers.~T. Lyn
Hello! 
>>Correct.
I have so many favorie teachers that Ican't just pick out one teacher.
>>I can't just pick one favorite teacher because I have many favorite teachers.
But all my favorite teachers are Mr.Thomas from kindergrten Mr.Jarret from my english academy (U.S. teachers), Ms.Jiah and Ms.Youngrong from elementary (Korean teachers) AND YOU, Ms.Lynn!! 
>>They are Mr. Thomas, my kindergarten teacher, Mr. Jarret who is my English academy teacher, Ms. Jiah and Ms. Youngrong, my elementary school teachers, who are Koreans, and you, Ms. Lyn. 
For my Mr.Thomas, he had always piggybacked me and pretended to be a rhino and made me laugh and helped me win the speech competition. 
>>I like Mr. Thomas because he always gave me a piggyback ride and pretended to be a rhino. He made me laugh and helped me win the speech competition.
For Mr.Jarret too, he hung me around like I am the daughter of him and gave me chocolates in seceret and he threatened ina kind way (?) he'd go too if I move to another english academy. 
>>I also like Mr. Jarret because he and I hung around and treated me like his own daughter as well as treated me in a good way. He also gave me chocolates in secret. I think he would go to another English academy if I transfer to another academy.
Mr.Thomas and Mr.Jarret are really like my second dads.
>>Mr. Thomas and Mr. Jarret are really like my second fathers.
Ms.Jiah and Ms.Youngrong are my SCHOOL teachers so I can't kbow much about them but I can feel their warmth for me as if they are my second moms. 
>>Ms. Jiah and Ms. Youngrong are my school teachers, I don't know much about them but I can feel their warmth for me as if they are my second mothers.
And you, Ms.Lynn is my best best best best best best teacher in the world!! 
>>And you, Ms. Lyn, is my best teacher in the world.
If I write more It will take 9 years to read!
>>If I were to give you the reasons why, it will take 9 years for me to finish.
I'll tell you EVERYTHING I LOVE ABOUT YOU in class! 
>>I will tell you everything, the reasons why and what I love about you in our class.
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