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Think of a problem that you have encountered and tell me how you solved it

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회원님의 영작문

What is the right strategy? upon these question I`ll always think and get setting to action in the real world.
Probable, many people want to get the solving problem that they faced with
but a lof of people doesn`t do the action through the thinking of their own strategical thinking because of lack of experience and not to learn about experienced thinking method.
I do the things which were related to a lot of thinking method because I`m in the stage of working manager of strategic division
So, I will manage to thick as a strategist and deep involved in knowledge worker.
Sometimes, even though I was a well-trained person who work as a strategic divison part, but I sometimes failed to solve a certain type of problems. It is always hardthing to act like a well-made strategic action.
But I`m try to find myself a distinct advantage that I used to make my own way
Thanks for reading Queeny see you on the phone

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Justin, 
Problem-solving enables us to identify and exploit opportunities in the environment and exert some level of control over the future. Problem-solving skills and the problem-solving process are critical parts of daily life both as individuals and in organizations. And Solving problems means making choices. Typically, effective problem-solving skills result in “happier, more confident, and more independent” individuals.  Always be happy and confident. 
~ Teacher QUENNY...

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What is the right strategy? upon these question I`ll always think and get setting to action in the real world.
>> What is the right strategy for this question?  I`ll always think and get set to action in the real world.
Probable, many people want to get the solving problem that they faced with
but a lof of people doesn`t do the action through the thinking of their own strategical thinking because of lack of experience and not to learn about experienced thinking method.
>> Probably, many people want to know how to solve a problem that they are facing but a lot of people don`t do the action. They are just thinking of their own strategical method but not consulting experts because of a lack of experience and not learning about the experienced thinking method.
I do the things which were related to a lot of thinking method because I`m in the stage of working manager of strategic division.
>> I do the things which were related to a lot of thinking methods because I`m in the position of a working manager in a strategic division.
So, I will manage to thick as a strategist and deep involved in knowledge worker.
>> So, I will manage to think as a strategist and be deeply involved as a knowledge worker.
Sometimes, even though I was a well-trained person who work as a strategic divison part, but I sometimes failed to solve a certain type of problems. 
>> Sometimes, even though I was a well-trained person who work in a strategic division part, I sometimes failed to solve certain types of problems. It is always hard things to act like a well-made strategic action.
It is always hardthing to act like a well-made strategic action.
>> But I try to find in myself a distinct advantage of me that I used to make my own way. 
But I`m try to find myself a distinct advantage that I used to make my own way
Thanks for reading Queeny see you on the phone.
>> Thanks for reading Quenny see you on the phone.

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What is the right strategy? upon these question I`ll always think and get setting to action in the real world.
Probable, many people want to get the solving problem that they faced with
but a lof of people doesn`t do the action through the thinking of their own strategical thinking because of lack of experience and not to learn about experienced thinking method.
I do the things which were related to a lot of thinking method because I`m in the stage of working manager of strategic division
So, I will manage to thick as a strategist and deep involved in knowledge worker.
Sometimes, even though I was a well-trained person who work as a strategic divison part, but I sometimes failed to solve a certain type of problems. It is always hardthing to act like a well-made strategic action.
But I`m try to find myself a distinct advantage that I used to make my own way
Thanks for reading Queeny see you on the phone
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