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Which animals are endangered? How can we protect them?

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I know a little bit about the endangered animals. It is whales, tigers, otters, polar bears and so on. And I think we have to protect them, we can do use tumbler, don't use a lot of electronics, plastics or papers and do the campaign for endangered animals. The way is very many so we need to protect endangered animals.

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Hi, Daisy!
Great work! I totally agree with your answer. Protecting endangered animals is very important. If there are things we could do to contribute and to lessen the harmful things to endangered animals, we should do it and we should cooperate.
~Teacher Erin

I know a little bit about the endangered animals.
>>I know a little bit about endangered animals.
It is whales, tigers, otters, polar bears, and so on.
>>CORRECT
 And I think we have to protect them,
>>CORRECT
 we can do use tumbler,
>>we can use a tumbler,
 don't use a lot of electronics, plastics, or paper, and do the campaign for endangered animals.
>>CORRECT
 The way is very many so we need to protect endangered animals.
>>There are lots of ways to protect endangered animals.
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