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1. I got overwhelmed for crowd in music concert
2. How is your mood usually?
3. It's critical key to explain my mood to other people
4. What's the best contented thing in your life?
5. Are you good at describing your mood?

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Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework today, Elic. Please review my corrections carefully, especially punctuations and then try to take notes of the corrections which you have noticed from them. Again, thank you and have a great day ahead! :)

1. I got overwhelmed for crowd in music concert
>> I got overwhelmed by the crowd in the concert.
2. How is your mood usually?
>> Correct.
3. It's critical key to explain my mood to other people
>> It's complicated explaining my mood to other people.
4. What's the best contented thing in your life?
>> What the best thing that you are contented with in your life?
5. Are you good at describing your mood?
>> Correct.
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