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Think of a problem that you have encountered and tell me how you solved it

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2022-09-16 1829

회원님의 영작문

This is my job. then, I always think as a data-driven solution development and big inventment heading to our control tower.
Ahead of doing this act of action, we do had to consider a lot of a uncertainty.
In this situation, We need to both hypothetical thing method and connecting the problem something like that.
So, I was used to think in that way of doing whether It would be successful or not.
Many times I had to got the point, which contiuned to maintain my thinking method.
Even though this kind of thought was faliure, even so I tried to keep doing of my own way.
It will be possible to more often take the good position where I have been to.
And I never giveup the every situation that I`ll be faced of.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
Problems are part of our life. Without problems how would we ever find success or happiness? If there is a problem, only we have the power to solve it.
 The ability to solve problems in life can make a huge difference and it gets easier when you realize that problems are simply choices. To be an effective problem-solver, you need to be systematic and logical in your approach. Accept problems as they come and try helping yourself by looking out for ways to find solutions. And let your mind be open to suggestions and advice that will help to make life a little easier. ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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This is my job. then, I always think as a data-driven solution development and big inventment heading to our control tower.
>> This is my job. then, I always think of data-driven solution development and a big investment heading to our control tower.
Ahead of doing this act of action, we do had to consider a lot of a uncertainty.
>> Ahead of doing this act of action, we do have to consider a lot of uncertainty.
In this situation, We need to both hypothetical thing method and connecting the problem something like that.
>> In this situation, we need both hypothetical thing methods and connecting the problem or something like that.
So, I was used to think in that way of doing whether It would be successful or not.
>> So, I'm used to thinking about that way of doing things and whether it would be successful or not.
Many times I had to got the point, which contiuned to maintain my thinking method.
>> Most of the time I have to get the point, which continues to maintain my thinking method.
Even though this kind of thought was faliure, even so I tried to keep doing of my own way.
>> Even though this kind of thought was a failure I tried to keep doing things in my own way.
It will be possible to more often take the good position where I have been to.
>> It will be possible to more often take the good position where I have been to.(CORRECT) 
And I never giveup the every situation that I`ll be faced of.
>> And I never give up on every situation that I`ll be faced in the future. 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is my job. then, I always think as a data-driven solution development and big inventment heading to our control tower.
Ahead of doing this act of action, we do had to consider a lot of a uncertainty.
In this situation, We need to both hypothetical thing method and connecting the problem something like that.
So, I was used to think in that way of doing whether It would be successful or not.
Many times I had to got the point, which contiuned to maintain my thinking method.
Even though this kind of thought was faliure, even so I tried to keep doing of my own way.
It will be possible to more often take the good position where I have been to.
And I never giveup the every situation that I`ll be faced of.
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