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Hi Gemmar

작성자: 이*진
2022-09-16 2340

회원님의 영작문

I show your picture to my husband.
My husband told me that your husband looks so masculine and you look great.
I thought you are a big girl because you always told me that you gain your weight. hahaha
When I visited Philippine 2 years ago, I knew that the apperance of Pilipino are different with Indonesia, Thiland and Malaysia.
Specially women are different looking compared with other east south asian women. however you don't look like Piipino.
You 'd better ask your grandma where your familiy had come from.
Did I tell you before that I have close Indonesia friends?
I met them when I was in my 20's in Newzealand.
We studied together at the same calss and I used to visit Indonesia.
Indonesian have also their particular looking.
I guess that language have their face change although living same continent like Korean, Japanese and Chinese.
We look different because of language and culture.

Any way, Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning Ms. Eunice! Thanks for sharing me your insights about me. Hahaha! Anyway, I will tell you 100% that I am a Filipina. Hahaha! I was born and raise in the Philippines. Hahaha! My grandfather told me that we somewhat have Spanish blood because our ancestors were Spanish. Spaniards colonized our country for 333 years according to our history. So we kind a adapted some of Spanish cultures. At first for me, Koreans, Japanese and Chinese were all the same people Hahaha! Because you guys looked alike. However, if I looked closely and listen to your language, that's the time I recognize which country you guys come from. Hahaha!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA 
I show your picture to my husband.
>>> CORRECT
My husband told me that your husband looks so masculine and you look great.
>>> CORRECT
I thought you are a big girl because you always told me that you gain your weight. hahaha
>>> CORRECT
When I visited Philippine 2 years ago, I knew that the appearance of Filipinos is different from Indonesians, Thais and Malaysians.
>>> CORRECT
Specially women are different looking compared with other east south asian women. however you don't look like Piipino.
>>> Specially women are different looking compared to other southeast Asian women. However, you don't look like a Pilipino.
You 'd better ask your grandma where your familiy had come from.
>>> CORRECT
Did I tell you before that I have a close Indonesian friends?
>>> CORRECT
I met them when I was in my 20's in New Zealand.
>>> CORRECT
We studied together in the same class and I used to visit Indonesia.
>>> CORRECT
Indonesian have also their particular looking.
>>>Indonesians have their particular looks too.
I guess that language have their face change although living same continent like Korean, Japanese and Chinese.
>>>I guess that languages have their face changed although living in the same continent like Korea, Japan and China.
We look different because of our language and culture.
>>> CORRECT
Any way, Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
>>> CORRECT
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