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Examiner: Good morning. My name is Tom. Could you tell me your name please?
Examinee: It¡¯s Sewon, Yoon
Examiner: Thank you. Let¡¯s start by telling me a little something about your hometown.
Examinee: My hometown is Seoul and it¡¯s capital of Korea, so my hometown is very famous and this city is well developed.
Examiner: What are some of the most interesting places there?
Examinee: I think the most interesting place is Gangnam. Because there are many festivals and there are variety things to enjoy.
Examiner: If I were to visit your hometown, what places could you recommend?
Examinee: If you visit Seoul, I will recommend visit Gyeongbokgoong. Because it¡¯s the biggest traditional castle in Korea.
Examiner: What¡¯s the weather like in your hometown?
Examinee: The weather is different every day. Someday, it¡¯s shine but someday, it¡¯s raining.
Examiner: I see. Thank you for that. Now, I would like to ask you about your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
Examinee: Yes. I have o

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Happy Friday, Se Won!

 

It seems that you¡¯re practicing very hard for your exam. You're doing good but keep working hard to ace the test! Have a great day ahead!

 

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Examiner: Good morning. My name is Tom. Could you tell me your name please?
Examinee: It¡¯s Sewon, Yoon

>> Correct.

Or >> I¡¯m Sewon, Yoon.
Examiner: Thank you. Let¡¯s start by telling me a little something about your hometown.
Examinee: My hometown is Seoul and it¡¯s capital of Korea,

>> My hometown is in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea.

so my hometown is very famous and this city is well developed.

>> My hometown is well-known and developed city.
Examiner: What are some of the most interesting places there?
Examinee: I think the most interesting place is Gangnam.

>> I think the most interesting place in my hometown is Gangnam.

Because there are many festivals and there are variety things to enjoy.

>> Because there are many festivals and a wide range of enjoyable activities to do there.
Examiner: If I were to visit your hometown, what places could you recommend?
Examinee: If you visit Seoul, I will recommend visit Gyeongbokgoong.

>> If you're heading to Seoul, I recommend you go to Gyeongbokgoong.

Because it¡¯s the biggest traditional castle in Korea.

>> Because the largest traditional castle in Korea is located in Gyeongbokgoong..
Examiner: What¡¯s the weather like in your hometown?
Examinee: The weather is different every day.

>> The weather changes every day.

Someday, it¡¯s shine but someday, it¡¯s raining.

>> It can rain or be sunny at times.

Examiner: I see. Thank you for that. Now, I would like to ask you about your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
Examinee: Yes. I have o

>> Yes, I have siblings. 

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