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Do you think cosmetics are good for the skin? Why or why not?

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2022-09-15 2053

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I think the light cosmetics are good for skin. In my case, When I was a collage student, my skin was better than while vacation.
In vacation I didn't any makeup so I didn't care about my skin.
When some pimples get my skin, I just negleted.
It is because no one couldn't see my skin
But When I was get light makeup, I cleansing everyday and I cared my skin.
But excessive make up is not healthy. So proper costetics is better. And the most important thing is cleansing.

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Hello Eun Chae!
You got a point.  Every day, we should clean our skin with the appropriate soap, facial wash, and or cleanser.  We should not take our skin for granted since it shows how physically beautiful we are.  Stay pretty! ^^


~T. Maine

I think the light cosmetics are good for skin. 
>> I think light cosmetics are good for my skin. 
In my case, When I was a collage student, my skin was better than while vacation.
>> In my case, when I was a college student, my skin was better than when I was on vacation. 
In vacation I didn't any makeup so I didn't care about my skin.
>> During vacation. I didn't put on any makeup so I didn't care about my skin. 
When some pimples get my skin, I just negleted.
>> When some pimples are on my skin, I just neglected them. 
It is because no one couldn't see my skin
>> It is because no one could see my skin. 
But When I was get light makeup, I cleansing everyday and I cared my skin.
>> But when I was using light makeup, I cleanse my skin every day. 
But excessive make up is not healthy. 
>> But excessive makeup is not healthy. 
So proper costetics is better. 
>> So the use of proper cosmetics is better. 
And the most important thing is cleansing.
>> Correct. 

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