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I value and admire the calm leadership qualities most importantly. Because calm leaders are good listeners and can calm down and resolve situations. Also, if he loses his way, he'll be better at figuring things out with his teammates.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia



I value and admire the calm leadership qualities most importantly. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because calm leaders are good listeners and can calm down and resolve situations. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, if he loses his way, he'll be better at figuring things out with his teammates.
>>> CORRECT!
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