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What is the best festival in South Korea? Answer in a few sentences.

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The best festival in South Korea is a water bomb festival. Each spectator comes and brings a water gun to shot during the festival. There are also musicians rise the level of excitement. A swimsuit or a waterproof clothing is required to enjoy it.

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Good evening, Judy!

This sounds like a very fun and drenched festival! I have never heard about it before until I asked and you answered here on your homework. Tell me more about it in class tomorrow.

Meanwhile, your answer below is longer than usual, thank you very much for the effort to explain and expound. There are few grammar suggestions that include capitalization, and the correct choice of words. Read them carefully below. Great job!

See you then!

-T. Donna~

The best festival in South Korea is a water bomb festival. 
>> Correct!
Or: The best festival in South Korea is a Water Bomb Festival. 

Each spectator comes and brings a water gun to shot during the festival.
>> Each spectator comes and brings a water gun to shoot during the festival.

 There are also musicians rise the level of excitement. 
>> There are also musicians who raise the level of excitement.

A swimsuit or a waterproof clothing is required to enjoy it.
>> Correct!
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